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Jan 4, 2013, 5:19:39 PM
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Fashion Model Shoot by juniorimaginations Fashion Model Shoot by juniorimaginations
So this is a recent fashion model that I did, and this is more of a urban/ nature feel to it, it was a quick shoot, and i havent shot models in a while, and with her permission to post it on my profile let me know what you all think!

i am not a wardrobe and specialist, just would love some critique on the camera work and the model pose

thanks!

BTW if you love photography, anime, and especially YAOI!!!! check out my gallery!
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This piece definitely catches attention. I like the angle it was taken at, and the quality of the camera and focus is part of the recipe for a thoughtful photo. The model's outfit pops as well, it fits the mood of a very bright and happy scene paired with the more modern and almost grungy look of the background we can see when we focus. The model's face, however, doesn't seem like it was used to it's full potential. She looks uninterested, which does not play well in contrast to the pose she is making. Where her pose says carefree, fun, and interesting, her expression and the lack of makeup, accessories, etc. on her face and hair don't match. In the future I would look into finding a way to make your piece stand out from similar photos, and using all of the background and model to your advantage.
Overall, I think you have great potential, and lovely ideas. You just need to apply yourself and the model more to your photos.
Definitely worth a fave. ^-^
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I like the photo quality, which is sometimes hard to get these days. The lighting is amazing and the pose is something I've never seen before. I'm not an expert on photography, so don't take anything I say seriously. The photo angle is nice although her right leg looks like it was cut off from the picture. It seems the main focus is the girl and not the background-which I like- because sometimes backgrounds can washout or completely kill a picture. At the top corner of the picture, it looks a little bright and cuts off part of her hair.
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SamirYasir Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
es muy hermosa esta chica 
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lonornon228 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
nice shot .
and the model is kawaii.
this digital or film ?
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
digital shot!
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OdysseyDogHouse Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
nicely done buddy
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very very much!! :) means a lot to me
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OdysseyDogHouse Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional General Artist
you got it!
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kitsuyuutsu Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, I must be the only one that doesn't like her wardrobe :XD: I like all the pieces, just not when worn together :shrug:
but a critique of her fashion sense aside :giggle:
I actually think that the brightness of the sun in the background works well. the brightest portion is right behind her head, so it helps draw your focus to her face. and the pose helps your eye travel down the rest of the photo. I also like the illusion given. at first, you think that, for the most part, she's standing straight and leaning forward. but when you get towards the bottom and see the road, you realize otherwise, that the photo was taken on an angle.
as for her expression... when you look at her as a whole, you see that she's a very lovely young woman. but when you really look at her expression, it appears she has some sort of inner conflict and perhaps a touch of sadness. that's the impression I get from this, anyway (whether it's right or wrong). I think you captured not just her image, but the real person she is, if that makes sense :aww:
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
lol its okay i have no personal opinion about her colothing, i was more concerned about the camera work and the model positions and expression, you are the first actually to think of her expression in that manner, i had that vision of her facial expression too! what do you say great minds think a like huh!
but thank you for the lengthly critique, really appreciate your feedback! and yes i used the camera to give it a more dynamic look, camera work can make a simple pose seem very creative

also sorry for the late response been on a buisness trip lately
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kitsuyuutsu Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
never apologize for late responses :aww: I have a husband and two pre-teen kids so I know what it's like to be crazy busy! :faint:
I usually don't have any opinion about clothing, either. I'm not much into fashion, but I was rather amused everyone loved her ensemble and I didn't. :giggle:
I'm surprised no one else thought of her expression that way! so maybe great minds do think alike! ;) and I agree, I've been taking pictures at different angles myself and it really does make something simple look very creative! :aww:
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