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Fashion Model Shoot by juniorimaginations

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So this is a recent fashion model that I did, and this is more of a urban/ nature feel to it, it was a quick shoot, and i havent shot models in a while, and with her permission to post it on my profile let me know what you all think!

i am not a wardrobe and specialist, just would love some critique on the camera work and the model pose

thanks!

BTW if you love photography, anime, and especially YAOI!!!! check out my gallery!
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This piece definitely catches attention. I like the angle it was taken at, and the quality of the camera and focus is part of the recipe for a thoughtful photo. The model's outfit pops as well, it fits the mood of a very bright and happy scene paired with the more modern and almost grungy look of the background we can see when we focus. The model's face, however, doesn't seem like it was used to it's full potential. She looks uninterested, which does not play well in contrast to the pose she is making. Where her pose says carefree, fun, and interesting, her expression and the lack of makeup, accessories, etc. on her face and hair don't match. In the future I would look into finding a way to make your piece stand out from similar photos, and using all of the background and model to your advantage.
Overall, I think you have great potential, and lovely ideas. You just need to apply yourself and the model more to your photos.
Definitely worth a fave. ^-^
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I like the photo quality, which is sometimes hard to get these days. The lighting is amazing and the pose is something I've never seen before. I'm not an expert on photography, so don't take anything I say seriously. The photo angle is nice although her right leg looks like it was cut off from the picture. It seems the main focus is the girl and not the background-which I like- because sometimes backgrounds can washout or completely kill a picture. At the top corner of the picture, it looks a little bright and cuts off part of her hair.
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SamirYasir Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
es muy hermosa esta chica 
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:iconlonornon228:
lonornon228 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
nice shot .
and the model is kawaii.
this digital or film ?
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:iconjuniorimaginations:
juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
digital shot!
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OdysseyDogHouse Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
nicely done buddy
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:iconjuniorimaginations:
juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you very very much!! :) means a lot to me
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OdysseyDogHouse Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional General Artist
you got it!
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kitsuyuutsu Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Filmographer
wow, I must be the only one that doesn't like her wardrobe :XD: I like all the pieces, just not when worn together :shrug:
but a critique of her fashion sense aside :giggle:
I actually think that the brightness of the sun in the background works well. the brightest portion is right behind her head, so it helps draw your focus to her face. and the pose helps your eye travel down the rest of the photo. I also like the illusion given. at first, you think that, for the most part, she's standing straight and leaning forward. but when you get towards the bottom and see the road, you realize otherwise, that the photo was taken on an angle.
as for her expression... when you look at her as a whole, you see that she's a very lovely young woman. but when you really look at her expression, it appears she has some sort of inner conflict and perhaps a touch of sadness. that's the impression I get from this, anyway (whether it's right or wrong). I think you captured not just her image, but the real person she is, if that makes sense :aww:
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
lol its okay i have no personal opinion about her colothing, i was more concerned about the camera work and the model positions and expression, you are the first actually to think of her expression in that manner, i had that vision of her facial expression too! what do you say great minds think a like huh!
but thank you for the lengthly critique, really appreciate your feedback! and yes i used the camera to give it a more dynamic look, camera work can make a simple pose seem very creative

also sorry for the late response been on a buisness trip lately
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kitsuyuutsu Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Filmographer
never apologize for late responses :aww: I have a husband and two pre-teen kids so I know what it's like to be crazy busy! :faint:
I usually don't have any opinion about clothing, either. I'm not much into fashion, but I was rather amused everyone loved her ensemble and I didn't. :giggle:
I'm surprised no one else thought of her expression that way! so maybe great minds do think alike! ;) and I agree, I've been taking pictures at different angles myself and it really does make something simple look very creative! :aww:
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
ahhh so you have a lot of work to do around the house, i live with 3 little babies about 2 and 3 year olds
and i personally didnt have a fashion opinion, she wanted pictures of her in her outfit, so i helped her out, and ask for permission to post the photo
i use to take pictures either 180 or 90 degrees, thought it was the only way, but now i never do that and always have very very weird angles to bring the best of a picture
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kitsuyuutsu Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
oh, I remember those ages... that's when they're the most work! :XD: I remember being tired a lot when mine were so young. but now one will be 13 in a few weeks and the other will be 10 this summer, so they're not as much of a handful, just full of attitude. I don't know which is the lesser of two evils! :XD:
I agree, sometimes weird angles create the very best photos! =D especially in this case, it really brings the photo to life! ;)
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
so sorry for the the late response, been super backed up on DA >< sorry if this is rude to answer back this late, but i have been called out to work again for the last week! barely been home :(

hahah of course 13 and 10 they are going through their rebellious stage, or just starting lol, i rather prefer them after 21 lol! best of all evils!

one is turning 4 soon and be time for going to school!
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kitsuyuutsu Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
I totally understand :aww: I haven't been on the internet much this week myself =(

you got that right! :giggle: full of rebellion and attitude! I can't wait until they outgrow these phases, if I manage to make it through to see that day, that is! :XD:
I actually found myself missing my kids when they started school. I couldn't wait for the day they started going to get some peace, but once they were both in school, I couldn't stand the silence. it's better now, but sometimes I still miss them :aww:
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
hahha, since i am a godparent to the 2 and 3 year old, actually one is four now, the mother asked me if she can take care of him for like an hour just for a rest, and that is happenning much more often now lol. i think she is getting tired of taking care of two kids, needs some alone time i think.

and i think that is how the mother that i am helping out, she will feel too, her kids arent old enough for school yet, but once they start i think she would love their company again. i remember though when i was a kid i didnt want to come home from school, cause all my friends were there lol.
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emmankt Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Nice :D <3
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
hahah thanks :)
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Tulsa-Tom Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Photographer
Very nice overall. Good use of Bokeh, rule of thirds, posing, etc. I would have cropped it to leave in her legs and feet. I sometimes argue with myself on where to crop. But you are the artist, it's your call.
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
ahh thank you thank you very much! and composition is not my strongest suit yet becuase i am not selling anything, but yes cropping can make all the difference in the world and i sometimes like to take parts off a model, just because its more dynamic feel to it
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NamesAndSuch Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Good job...
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:iconjuniorimaginations:
juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very very much!!! :)
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AngelAxexinf Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
I like the photo quality, which is sometimes hard to get these days. The lighting is amazing and the pose is something I've never seen before. I'm not an expert on photography, so don't take anything I say seriously. The photo angle is nice although her right leg looks like it was cut off from the picture. It seems the main focus is the girl and not the background-which I like- because sometimes backgrounds can washout or completely kill a picture.
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you cery very much for your critique and your compliment! I can see your point of view about her leg and next time i will use that advice in my next shoot thank you very much!
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Mkrtich Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
nice color temperature
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:iconjuniorimaginations:
juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank u very very much!
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Mkrtich Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
=)
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mickeyrony Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Photographer
She look sexy Thanks to your time and fav Be smiling MIC KEYRONY
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha
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Hypnocrown Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
The pic looks really cool. Her pose is fine and the image is clear, nice work.
I love anime but unfortunately, I'm not much for Yaoi, I prefer Yuri. =D
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww haha its okay yaoi i still love cant change my ways! Lol
And thanks for the compliment!
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Hypnocrown Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
It's a good thing I'm not asking you to change then. =D
Sure, you're welcome.
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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JERUKA9 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lucker so pretty girl you have ;)
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha she was a model who wanted pictures for her use, client relationship
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wakawakawakawack Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Lovely shot ;3
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the feedback! :-) much appreciated
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wakawakawakawack Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:)
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jaguarcliff Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great sensei! The model 's pretty. The photo looks cool all in all.
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:iconjuniorimaginations:
juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Haha Thanks for the feedback! :-) much appreciated
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jaguarcliff Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome sensei :)
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ValhallaStarfire Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
I love how you made the lighting of the photo work so well for her, especially with such a warm-colored shirt as hers. It's very nice.
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the feedback! :-) much appreciated
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ValhallaStarfire Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
It's no problem. As an artist, I know that I REALLY appreciate feedback, so I've been trying to give some back to others.
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
ahh thank you thank you yes i love and live off of feedback! so thank you so much for doing that for me!
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ValhallaStarfire Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Not a problem.
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alybabyy Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Pretty nice shoot ! ^.^
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the feedback! :-) much appreciated
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alybabyy Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Welcome :) I love your pics !
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juniorimaginations Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you!!!
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Amazon7 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love the tights, shes very pretty and her eyes dig deep to the soul
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